For the next peer review, I will ask my peer mates to pay special attention to my thesis, contradictory statements throughout my paper, hook statements, the use of “I SAY” in my conclusion and my citations because I struggled in those areas during this first paper. It’s also hard to catch when you’re contradicting yourself so I think it would be helpful if others pointed it out. On this paper I think I did a good job of paraphrasing and transitioning between paragraphs.
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